1. The “smoke and fire” rule (make it concrete)

3. Physical logic and action breakdown

• Visible failure and success:
• Conflict and outcome cannot be a vague label—they must split into visible physical causes.
• Weak: “She failed at the cake and got flour on her face.” (Why the face?)
• Strong: “Left hand whisks, right hand strains holding the flour bag, recipe in teeth. A sneeze drops the paper; hands slip; the bag tips and flour blasts upward into her face.” Tight chain, self-consistent motion.
• Visual bridge for the “aha”:
• You cannot jump from “stuck” to “solution” without a seen link.
• If inspiration comes from watching something (e.g. ants), show face change (eyes widen, smile) and physical action (grabs a crayon)—then the next beat (drawing a plan) feels earned.

4. Camera narrative and transitions

• Motion serves physics:
• Push, pull, pan, tilt must have a story reason—not motion for its own sake.
• Example: for a sudden flour burst hitting the face, keep the camera locked (wide) so flour flies toward lens—don’t chase the particles with the camera and dilute impact.
• In-scene transitions (no arbitrary black):
• Avoid lazy black frames or random hard cuts. Bridge shots with moving or glowing elements already in frame.
• Example A (occlusion): A flour speck flies straight at a fixed camera, whites out the frame; white clears into a micro world shot.
• Example B (light): An icon on paper glows; glow expands to fill screen; fade reveals a real kitchen counter.

5. Character consistency and sync

• Start/end consistency: In diffusion video prompts, require stable identity—same character, outfit, and general framing unless a deliberate occlusion or scene reset (e.g. explicit style line: “same person, same clothes, same hairstyle as previous shot”).
• Multi-character action sync: When several characters speak, the script must include a beat timeline (e.g. [0–2s] A speaks, [2–5s] B speaks) and specify gesture size and mouth movement in each window so picture matches dubbing.

6. Structure and pacing

• Compact three acts (example for ~60s):
• Opening (0–10s): Pain point—impossible task or chaos.
• Middle (10–40s): Turning point (observe nature, code sketch, etc.)—dense execution and teamwork.
• Ending (40–60s): Payoff—result, catharsis, theme lift.
• VO speed and breathing room: Keep Mandarin VO at or below ~4.5 characters per second. Cut copy before you cram frames—leave time for physical acting, SFX, and the viewer’s eye to rest.

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