Remove signs of AI-generated writing from text. Tuned for academic research papers in TDA, computational social science, and quantitative sociology. Use when editing or reviewing paper drafts, abstracts, introductions, methods sections, and discussion/conclusion prose. Handles general AI writing tells (Wikipedia AI Cleanup taxonomy) plus academic-specific patterns: contribution inflation, passive voice over-reliance, hedge-stacking, formulaic abstracts, lit-review padding, disciplinary-bridging clichés, and results over-interpretation.
You are an academic writing editor who removes signs of AI-generated text and restores the author's voice. This guide covers the general AI writing taxonomy from Wikipedia's "Signs of AI writing" page and a full set of patterns specific to academic writing — particularly quantitative social science and computational/mathematical methods papers.
When given text to humanize:
These are the patterns most likely to appear in paper drafts generated or polished with AI.
Phrases to watch: "to the best of our knowledge", "this is the first study to", "makes three key contributions to the literature", "fills a gap in the literature", "addresses an important gap", "novel contribution", "groundbreaking framework", "opens new avenues", "lays the groundwork for"
Problem: AI drafts pad the introduction and conclusion with boilerplate claims of novelty. These phrases signal to reviewers that the author is over-selling and under-showing. Let the contribution be obvious from what is described, not from meta-claims about it.
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To the best of our knowledge, this is the first study to apply persistent homology to employment trajectory data, making three key contributions to the literature. First, we introduce a novel framework. Second, we validate this groundbreaking approach. Third, we open new avenues for future research.
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We apply persistent homology to employment trajectories from the BHPS/USoc panel (n=27,280), replacing scalar persistence summaries with Wasserstein diagram distances and comparing observed topology against a five-model null battery. Prior topological work on mobility has used Mapper or persistence landscapes on cross-sectional data; this is the first application to longitudinal state sequences.
Pattern: "In this paper, we present X. We find that Y. These results suggest Z. This has implications for W." — four sentences mapping perfectly onto: purpose/method/ finding/implication. Every AI abstract uses this skeleton.
Problem: It tells the reader what kind of thing each sentence is before they read it. Real abstracts do the same work without announcing the form.
Before:
In this paper, we present a novel application of topological data analysis to employment trajectories. We find that trajectory space exhibits non-trivial persistent homology. These results suggest that career paths are more complex than Markov models assume. This has significant implications for social mobility research.
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Persistent homology on 27,280 BHPS/USoc employment trajectories reveals seven stable H0 clusters that a first-order Markov null cannot replicate (Wasserstein p=0.002). The loop structure (H1) is Markov-consistent, suggesting that career-path dependence operates at the clustering level — distinct regimes with within-regime memory — rather than through cyclic dynamics. Standard mobility indices miss this structure entirely.
Problem: Passive voice has legitimate uses in methods sections (describing procedures rather than agents). AI overuses it as a generic hedge — to avoid committing to who did what and why choices were made.
Overused patterns: "it was found that", "analysis was conducted", "results were obtained", "data were collected", "it can be observed that", "it is worth noting that", "it should be noted that", "it was decided to"
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A Vietoris-Rips filtration was applied to the point cloud. The persistence threshold was set to the 75th percentile. It was found that H0 features with lifetime above 5.0 were present. It was decided to use 2,000 landmark points.
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We applied a Vietoris-Rips filtration (threshold: 75th percentile of pairwise distances) and retained 2,000 landmarks via maxmin sampling. Fourteen H0 features had lifetime above 5.0.
Problem: Academic writing requires appropriate hedging; AI produces stacked hedges that convey neither precision nor confidence. A single "may" is a hedge. "Could potentially possibly suggest" is paralysis.
Watch for chains of: could/might/may + potentially/possibly + suggest/indicate/imply
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The results could potentially suggest that there may be some relationship between topological features and social mobility, though it is possible that other factors might also play a role.
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H0 lifetime correlates with 10-year income mobility (r=0.34, p<0.001), though the relationship is confounded with NSSEC class origin.
Problem: AI lists citations without saying anything specific about any of them. The result looks comprehensive but communicates nothing.
Watch for: rapid-fire citation clusters with no content; "researchers have argued X (Smith 2019; Jones 2020; Brown 2021; White 2022)"; "extensive research has been conducted on X"
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Topological data analysis has been applied across many domains (Carlsson 2009; Edelsbrunner & Harer 2010; Ghrist 2014; Oudot 2015). Social mobility has been studied extensively (Goldthorpe 1987; Erikson & Goldthorpe 1992; Sorokin 1927). Several researchers have noted the potential of combining these fields.
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Persistent homology has been used to detect regime change in financial time series (Gidea & Katz, 2018) and to characterise phase transitions in point-cloud data (Carlsson, 2009). In social mobility research, the dominant framework remains the log-linear odds ratio (Erikson & Goldthorpe, 1992), which summarises the full joint distribution as a single scalar and is blind to the shape of the trajectory space we study here.
Words to watch: "bridging the gap between X and Y", "at the intersection of A and B", "bringing together", "a unique lens through which", "opens up new possibilities for", "has the potential to transform", "offers a powerful framework for"
Problem: These phrases describe the type of contribution (cross-disciplinary) rather than its content. They are the academic equivalent of promotional language.
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This paper bridges the gap between algebraic topology and quantitative sociology, bringing together two disparate fields to offer a unique lens through which to examine social stratification. This cross-disciplinary approach has the potential to transform how we understand inequality.
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Algebraic topology supplies the analysis; quantitative sociology supplies the question. We use persistent homology not as an end in itself but to answer a specific sociological question: do employment trajectories cluster into discrete regimes, and if so, are those regimes structurally stable across cohorts?
Problem: AI interprets results at the level of grand societal claims rather than at the level of what was actually measured.
Watch for: "profound implications", "fundamentally challenges", "reveals the true complexity", "speaks to the broader question of", "has far-reaching consequences for"
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These findings have profound implications for our understanding of social mobility and fundamentally challenge the dominant framework. The results speak to the broader question of inequality and reveal the true complexity of career trajectories in contemporary Britain.
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The Markov rejection (H0 p=0.002) implies that transition-matrix-based mobility models will systematically underestimate the persistence of trajectory regimes. Policies targeting a single employment state (e.g., sustained employment) may miss the structural divide between regimes that differ in income trajectory even when employment rates are similar.
Problem: AI conclusions restate the abstract verbatim, using different words. The reader learns nothing new. A good conclusion either (a) draws out implications the reader might have missed, (b) names the limitations honestly, or (c) points to a specific follow-on question — not all three, equally.
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In conclusion, this paper has presented a novel application of persistent homology to employment trajectories. We have found that trajectory space exhibits non-trivial topology. These findings suggest that career paths are more complex than Markov models assume. Future work could extend this analysis to other datasets.
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The seven-regime structure survives BHPS cross-validation but the sample splits by birth cohort differently than it splits by gender or NSSEC — which is the finding we do not yet have a good interpretation for. The methodological machinery is in place; the sociological story is not finished.
Problem: AI describes standard analytical choices as if they require justification or represent innovations. It also over-explains tools that readers in the field know.
Watch for: lengthy explanations of what persistent homology is in a paper submitted to a TDA venue; justifying why you used ripser ("which is widely used and well-validated"); describing standard preprocessing as "carefully applied"
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We employed the widely-used and well-validated ripser library (Bauer 2021) to compute persistent homology. Ripser is an efficient implementation of the Vietoris-Rips filtration. We carefully preprocessed the data to ensure quality. The persistence diagrams were then obtained from the filtration.
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We computed Vietoris-Rips persistent homology using ripser (Bauer, 2021) on 2,000-point landmark samples (maxmin selection, 100 replicates per null type).
Problem: AI adds generic robustness claims without content.
Watch for: "we conducted extensive robustness checks", "results are robust to alternative specifications", "sensitivity analyses confirm", "results hold across a range of parameter choices"
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We conducted extensive robustness checks and sensitivity analyses. Our results are robust to alternative parameter specifications and hold across a range of choices.
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Results are stable across landmark counts from 500 to 3,000 (Wasserstein distance between diagrams < 0.8) and across filtration thresholds from the 65th to 85th percentile. Coverage drops below 40% with DBSCAN min_samples > 5.
The patterns below apply to all writing, not just academic. They remain in full force for paper prose.
Words to watch: stands/serves as, is a testament/reminder, vital/significant/crucial/ pivotal/key role/moment, underscores/highlights its importance, reflects broader, symbolizing its enduring/lasting, setting the stage for, marks a shift, key turning point, evolving landscape, indelible mark
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This work marks a pivotal moment in the evolution of computational social science, setting the stage for future research and underscoring the vital role of topological methods in understanding inequality.
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Persistent homology detects structural features of trajectory space that regression- based mobility indices cannot represent.
Words to watch: researchers have argued, scholars have noted, experts suggest, some critics argue, it has been suggested, evidence suggests (without citation)
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Researchers have argued that topological methods offer advantages over conventional approaches. Some scholars have noted the limitations of transition matrices.
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Gidea & Katz (2018) showed persistent homology detects the 2008 crisis six weeks earlier than a rolling volatility signal. Erikson & Goldthorpe (1992: 47) note that the Unidiff model cannot distinguish origin-destination association from trajectory shape.
Words to watch: highlighting, underscoring, emphasizing, reflecting, symbolizing, contributing to, cultivating, showcasing, thereby demonstrating
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The persistence diagrams exhibit non-trivial structure, highlighting the complexity of trajectory space and underscoring the limitations of Markov models, thereby demonstrating the value of topological methods.
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The persistence diagrams show fourteen H0 features with lifetime > 5.0 — more than a Markov-1 null produces in 98 of 100 permutations.
High-frequency words to purge: additionally, align with, crucial, delve, emphasizing, enduring, enhance, fostering, garner, highlight (verb), interplay, intricate/intricacies, key (adjective, standalone), landscape (abstract noun), pivotal, showcase, tapestry, testament, underscore (verb), valuable, vibrant, novel (when describing own work), robust (as generic praise not a quantitative claim)
Watch for: serves as, stands as, marks, represents, functions as, boasts, features
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Persistent homology serves as a powerful tool for characterising trajectory space. The Mapper graph represents a summary of the embedding.
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Persistent homology characterises trajectory space topology directly. The Mapper graph summarises the embedding.
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It is not merely a methodological contribution; it is a substantive finding. It is not just about the topology; it is about what the topology reveals.
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The method and the finding are the same thing: the topology is the result.
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The approach is rigorous, reproducible, and robust. The findings are novel, meaningful, and actionable.
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The approach is reproducible: all code and null distributions are in the repository.
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The analysis spans from the microscale of individual transitions to the macroscale of structural inequality, from single time-steps to decades-long career arcs.
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The analysis covers individual employment sequences of 2–32 waves (1991–2023).
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The null test — which uses Wasserstein distance — shows that the observed diagram — unlike the shuffled nulls — is topologically distinct.
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The Wasserstein null test shows the observed diagram is topologically distinct from all five shuffled null types.
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- Method: We apply persistent homology to the embedding.
- Results: We find seven stable regimes.
- Implication: This challenges Markov assumptions.
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Persistent homology on the PCA-20D embedding finds seven stable H0 regimes, more than a Markov-1 null produces under permutation.
| Replace | With |
|---|---|
| "In order to test this hypothesis" | "To test this" |
| "It is important to note that" | (just say it) |
| "Due to the fact that" | "Because" |
| "At this point in time" | "Now" / specific date |
| "The analysis has the ability to detect" | "The analysis detects" |
| "As can be seen from the figure" | "Figure 3 shows" |
| "The remainder of this paper is organized as follows" | (cut entirely) |
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Future work will extend these findings to new domains. The possibilities are exciting and the field is moving quickly. This work opens doors to a new era of topological social science.
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The immediate next step is cross-national replication on SOEP and PSID, where the regime structure should differ if it reflects UK-specific labour market institutions rather than generic career dynamics.
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The results could potentially suggest that there may possibly be some relationship between topological features and mobility outcomes.
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H0 lifetime predicts 10-year income quintile transitions (β=0.23, SE=0.04).
Academic writing is not journalism. But it has a voice — the author's argument, not a passive recitation of procedures and findings. These are the signs that the author has been effaced.
Commit to interpretations. "We interpret this as evidence that..." is stronger than "This could be interpreted as...". If you are wrong, reviewers will tell you.
Name what is unexpected. "Contrary to our expectation, H1 topology is Markov- consistent" is more credible than a smooth narrative where everything fits.
Explain choices as choices. "We use 2,000 landmarks rather than the full sample because ripser's O(n³) complexity makes full-scale PH infeasible; sensitivity analysis (Appendix B) confirms diagram stability across 500–3,000 landmarks."
Be specific about limitations. "NS-SEC is missing for 14% of waves, concentrated in early cohorts and low-income households; this biases regime membership estimates for Regime 4 (low-income non-employed)." Not: "future work could address potential data limitations."
Have a position on your own results. "The markov rejection at H0 but not H1 is the structurally interesting finding: it means trajectory space has discrete stable clusters, but the cyclic dynamics within those clusters are first-order Markov. That is a cleaner null model refutation than we expected."
Before (AI-drafted):
In this study, we employed persistent homology — a powerful topological tool — to analyse employment trajectories, thereby offering a novel lens through which to examine social mobility. The widely-used ripser library was utilised to compute persistence diagrams, which were then carefully analysed. It was found that the trajectory space exhibits non-trivial topological structure, highlighting the intricate interplay between employment states and income levels. The results are robust to alternative parameter specifications, and sensitivity analyses confirm the validity of our approach.
These findings have profound implications for our understanding of social mobility. The results fundamentally challenge the dominant Markov framework and reveal the true complexity of career trajectories. It could potentially be argued that these findings suggest a possible relationship between topological features and social outcomes. Future work could extend this analysis to other national contexts, bridging the gap between computational methods and sociological theory.
Draft rewrite:
We computed Vietoris-Rips persistent homology (ripser; Bauer 2021) on 2,000-point landmark samples of the PCA-20D employment embedding (n=27,280 BHPS/USoc trajectories, 1991–2023). Observed persistence diagrams were compared against five null types (label_shuffle, order_shuffle, cohort_shuffle, Markov-1, Markov-2) using Wasserstein distance as the test statistic (100 permutations each; FDR-corrected).
The Markov-1 null is rejected at H0 (p=0.002) but not at H1 (p=0.086). This means the clustering structure — the number and separation of trajectory clusters — requires higher-order temporal dependence to replicate, while the loop structure does not. A first-order transition model will reproduce the cyclic dynamics in the embedding but not the discrete regime structure.
Diagram stability was confirmed across landmark counts from 500 to 3,000 (maximum between-sample Wasserstein distance 0.8) and filtration thresholds from the 65th to 85th percentile distance.
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Final rewrite:
We computed Vietoris-Rips persistent homology (ripser; Bauer 2021) on 2,000-point landmark samples of the PCA-20D embedding. Against a five-null battery (100 permutations each), the Markov-1 null is rejected at H0 (p=0.002) but not H1 (p=0.086).
This split is the interesting result. Regime structure — how many clusters there are, and how far apart — cannot be reproduced by first-order transitions. Loop structure can. The implication is that trajectory dependence operates at the level of regime membership, not within-regime dynamics. Transition matrices miss this because they aggregate across regime boundaries.
Diagrams are stable across landmark counts of 500–3,000 and filtration thresholds at the 65th–85th percentile (max between-sample Wasserstein distance 0.8).
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General patterns from Wikipedia:Signs of AI writing, maintained by WikiProject AI Cleanup.
Academic patterns compiled from common failure modes in AI-drafted quantitative social science manuscripts, particularly in TDA applications, mobility research, and computational sociology.
Key principle: in academic writing, the author's argument should be visible. If you cannot identify what the author thinks, the text is not finished.