Afrexai Conversion Copywriting

Score: /40 — Below 32 = significant opportunity. Below 24 = copy is actively losing money.

Phase 1: Research Before Writing

Never write a single word until you complete this. Bad research = bad copy, no matter how clever.

1.1 Voice of Customer (VoC) Mining

The goal: steal your customer's EXACT words and mirror them back.

Sources (ranked by value):

VoC Extraction Template:

voC_research:
  product: "[Product name]"
  date: "YYYY-MM-DD"
  
  pain_statements:  # Exact quotes about the problem
    - quote: "I spend 3 hours every morning just reconciling invoices"
      source: "G2 review - AccountingSoft competitor"
      frequency: "high"  # How often this sentiment appears
    - quote: ""
      source: ""
      frequency: ""
  
  desire_statements:  # What they WANT (outcome language)
    - quote: "I just want to click one button and have it done"
      source: "Reddit r/smallbusiness"
      frequency: "medium"
    - quote: ""
      source: ""
      frequency: ""
  
  objection_statements:  # Why they hesitate
    - quote: "Every tool like this requires a PhD to set up"
      source: "Support ticket"
      frequency: "high"
    - quote: ""
      source: ""
      frequency: ""
  
  trigger_events:  # What made them start looking
    - "Hired 5th employee and spreadsheets broke"
    - "Missed a tax deadline"
    - ""
  
  words_they_use:  # Industry/audience vocabulary
    - "reconciliation" not "financial harmonization"
    - "setup" not "onboarding flow"
    - ""
  
  competitors_they_mention: []
  
  buying_criteria:  # What matters most (ranked)
    - "Easy to set up (< 1 hour)"
    - "Integrates with QuickBooks"
    - ""

1.2 Awareness Levels (Eugene Schwartz)

Every piece of copy must match the reader's awareness level. Writing "Buy now!" to someone who doesn't know they have a problem = wasted words.

Rule: The less aware they are, the longer the copy needs to be. Unaware = long-form education. Most Aware = short CTA + offer.

1.3 One Reader, One Offer, One Action

Before writing, fill this in:

copy_brief:
  surface: ""  # Landing page, email, ad, sales page, etc.
  one_reader: ""  # Specific person (not "small businesses" — "Sarah, ops manager at 50-person agency")
  awareness_level: ""  # Unaware / Problem / Solution / Product / Most Aware
  one_offer: ""  # What exactly are you offering?
  one_action: ""  # What exactly should they DO?
  primary_emotion: ""  # Fear, desire, curiosity, frustration, hope
  proof_available: []  # Testimonials, case studies, data points you can use
  objections_to_address: []  # Top 3 reasons they'd say no
  word_count_target: ""  # Constraint forces clarity

Phase 2: Headline Writing

The headline does 80% of the work. If the headline fails, nothing else matters.

2.1 Headline Formulas (12 Proven Patterns)

2.2 Headline Quality Test

Score each headline candidate 0-2 per criterion:

Score: /10 — Ship at 7+. Below 5 = rewrite.

2.3 Subheadline Rules

The subheadline expands on the headline promise. It should:

• Add specificity the headline couldn't fit
• Address the reader directly ("you")
• Lower the perceived effort/risk
• Create a "nodding" effect (reader thinks "yes, that's me")

Pattern: [Expand on headline promise] + [For whom] + [Without the main objection]

Example: Headline: "Double Your Pipeline in 30 Days"
Subheadline: "The AI-powered outreach system that books qualified calls for B2B founders — without cold calling or hiring SDRs."

Phase 3: Copy Frameworks (The Arsenal)

3.1 Core Frameworks

AIDA — Attention, Interest, Desire, Action Best for: Landing pages, sales pages, long-form emails

ATTENTION: Hook with the biggest pain or boldest promise
INTEREST: "Here's why this matters to YOU specifically..."
DESIRE: Paint the after-state. Make them feel the transformation.
ACTION: Single, clear, low-risk next step.

PAS — Problem, Agitate, Solution Best for: Short emails, ads, social posts, pain-driven products

PROBLEM: State the problem in their words (from VoC research)
AGITATE: What happens if they don't solve it? Cost of inaction.
SOLUTION: Your product/offer as the bridge from pain to relief.

BAB — Before, After, Bridge Best for: Case studies, testimonials, transformation stories

BEFORE: Paint their current painful reality (specific details)
AFTER: Paint the future they want (specific results)
BRIDGE: Your product is the bridge between the two.

PASTOR — Problem, Amplify, Story, Transformation, Offer, Response Best for: Long-form sales pages, webinar scripts

PROBLEM: Identify the core pain
AMPLIFY: Consequences of not solving (emotional + financial)
STORY: Tell a relevant story (yours, a customer's, or a parable)
TRANSFORMATION: Show before → after with proof
OFFER: Present the solution with everything included
RESPONSE: Clear CTA with urgency

4Ps — Promise, Picture, Proof, Push Best for: Ads, product pages, short landing pages

PROMISE: What will the reader get? (Specific outcome)
PICTURE: Help them visualize having it (sensory language)
PROOF: Evidence it works (testimonials, data, case studies)
PUSH: CTA with urgency or scarcity

Star-Story-Solution Best for: Email sequences, personality-driven brands

STAR: Introduce the character (your customer or you)
STORY: The struggle and the journey
SOLUTION: How the product solved the problem

3.2 Framework Selection Guide

Phase 4: Surface-Specific Templates

4.1 Landing Page Structure

[HERO SECTION]
├── Headline (formula from Phase 2)
├── Subheadline (expand + specify + de-risk)
├── Hero image or demo GIF
├── Primary CTA button
└── Social proof bar (logos, "Trusted by X companies", star rating)

[PROBLEM SECTION]
├── "Sound familiar?" or "You're here because..."
├── 3-4 pain bullets (from VoC, in their words)
└── Cost of inaction statement

[SOLUTION SECTION]
├── "Here's how [Product] fixes this"
├── 3 key benefits (NOT features) with icons
├── Each benefit: [Benefit headline] + [1-2 sentence expansion] + [Proof point]
└── Screenshot or visual

[SOCIAL PROOF SECTION]
├── 2-3 testimonials (name, company, result, photo)
├── OR case study snippet (Before → After with numbers)
└── Trust badges (security, integrations, awards)

[OBJECTION HANDLING SECTION]
├── FAQ or "Common questions" (address top 3-5 objections)
└── Each answer is a mini-sale (reframe objection → benefit)

[FINAL CTA SECTION]
├── Restate the core promise
├── Risk reversal (guarantee, free trial, no CC required)
├── CTA button (same as hero)
└── Urgency element if genuine (limited spots, price going up, deadline)

4.2 Email Copy Templates

Cold Email (first touch):

Subject: [Specific observation about their business]

[First name],

[Observation about their company — proves you did research, 1 sentence]

[Problem you solve — framed as "companies like yours" + specific pain, 1-2 sentences]

[Result you've delivered — specific number/outcome, 1 sentence]

[Soft CTA — question or offer, not "let me know if you want to chat"]

[Name]

P.S. [Proof point or curiosity hook]

Welcome Email (post-signup):

Subject: You're in — here's your [thing] + what to do first

[First name],

Welcome to [Product]. You just made a smart move.

Here's your [thing they signed up for]:
→ [Link or attachment]

**Your next step (takes 2 minutes):**
[Single specific action that gets them to first value]

If you hit any snags, reply to this email — I read every one.

[Name]
[Title] at [Company]

Abandoned Cart / Trial Expiring:

Subject: Still thinking it over?

[First name],

You [started a trial / added X to cart] [timeframe] ago but didn't [complete / continue].

Totally fine — here's what you might be wondering:

**"Is it worth the price?"**
[1-2 sentences with proof point / ROI calculation]

**"What if it doesn't work for me?"**
[Risk reversal — guarantee, refund policy, support]

**"I don't have time right now"**
[Time-to-value statement — "takes 10 minutes to set up"]

[CTA — "Pick up where you left off →"]

[Name]

4.3 Ad Copy Templates

Facebook/Instagram Ad:

[Hook — first line must stop the scroll, max 125 chars]
↓
[Problem — 1-2 lines, relatable pain]
↓
[Solution — what your product does differently, 1-2 lines]
↓
[Proof — number, testimonial snippet, or social proof]
↓
[CTA — "Click [Link] to [specific outcome]"]

Google Search Ad:

Headline 1: [Primary keyword + benefit] (30 chars)
Headline 2: [Proof/number + differentiator] (30 chars)
Headline 3: [CTA or offer] (30 chars)
Description: [Expand on benefit] + [Address objection] + [CTA] (90 chars)

LinkedIn Ad:

[Pattern interrupt — stat, question, or contrarian take]

[2-3 lines expanding on the problem — professional tone, specific to role]

[What we built / discovered / proved — 1-2 lines]

[CTA with specific value exchange — "Download the playbook" not "Learn more"]

4.4 Sales Page (Long-Form)

1. HEADLINE — Biggest promise or transformation
2. SUBHEADLINE — For whom + timeframe + de-risk
3. OPENING STORY — Paint the painful "before" state (2-3 paragraphs)
4. AGITATION — Cost of staying stuck (emotional + financial)
5. INTRODUCTION — "There's a better way" (introduce your solution concept)
6. WHAT'S INCLUDED — Bullet list of everything, each bullet = mini benefit
7. BONUSES — Additional value stacked on top
8. SOCIAL PROOF — 3-5 testimonials with results
9. PRICE REVEAL — Anchor high first, then show actual price
10. GUARANTEE — Risk reversal (money-back, satisfaction, results-based)
11. FAQ — Overcome remaining objections
12. FINAL CTA — Urgency + restate the transformation
13. P.S. — Restate the best benefit + guarantee (many people skip to P.S.)

4.5 Product Description

[One-line benefit headline — what it DOES for the buyer]

[2-3 sentences: who it's for, what problem it solves, key differentiator]

Key features:
• [Feature] — [Why it matters to the buyer]
• [Feature] — [Why it matters to the buyer]
• [Feature] — [Why it matters to the buyer]

[Social proof snippet — "Used by X", review quote, or stat]

[CTA]

4.6 Video Script (VSL / Demo)

[0:00-0:10] HOOK — Bold claim or question that creates curiosity gap
[0:10-0:45] PROBLEM — Paint the pain (specific, relatable scenario)
[0:45-1:30] AGITATE — What happens if they don't solve it (costs, risks)
[1:30-3:00] SOLUTION — Introduce your product, show it working
[3:00-4:00] PROOF — Results, testimonials, before/after
[4:00-4:30] OFFER — What they get, what it costs, guarantee
[4:30-5:00] CTA — Tell them exactly what to do next

Phase 5: Persuasion Techniques

5.1 Power Words by Emotion

5.2 Objection Handling in Copy

Every piece of copy must preemptively address objections. The top 5 universal objections:

5.3 Social Proof Hierarchy

Not all proof is equal. Use the highest-tier proof available:

Rule: Always aim for Tier 1-2. If you only have Tier 5-6, go get better proof before writing more copy.

5.4 CTA Writing Rules

5.5 Price Anchoring

Always anchor before revealing price:

Pattern 1 — Value Stack:
"You'd normally pay $500/hr for a consultant to do this.
 You could hire a full-time person for $80K/year.
 Or you can get [Product] for $47/month."

Pattern 2 — Cost of Problem:
"The average company loses $23K/year to [problem].
 [Product] costs $97/month. That's a 19x return."

Pattern 3 — Competitor Anchor:
"[Competitor] charges $299/month for half the features.
 [Product] gives you everything for $97/month."

Phase 6: Editing & Scoring

6.1 The Editing Checklist (run on every piece)

Clarity Pass:

• Remove every word that doesn't earn its place
• Replace jargon with plain language
• One idea per sentence. One point per paragraph.
• Read it aloud. If you stumble, rewrite.

Specificity Pass:

• Replace "many" with actual numbers
• Replace "quickly" with actual timeframes
• Replace "improve" with actual outcomes
• Replace "leading" with actual rankings or proof

Engagement Pass:

• First sentence hooks (would YOU keep reading?)
• Vary sentence length. Short. Then a longer one that builds. Then short again.
• Use "you" more than "we" (3:1 ratio minimum)
• Break up walls of text (no paragraph > 3 lines on mobile)

Conversion Pass:

• CTA is above the fold AND repeated
• Every section ends with a reason to keep reading or a CTA
• Objections are addressed BEFORE the CTA
• Guarantee or risk reversal is prominent

Trust Pass:

• No hype words without proof backing them up
• Testimonials have names, companies, and specific results
• Claims are believable (extraordinary claims need extraordinary proof)
• No AI-speak: cut "leverage", "streamline", "seamlessly", "I'd be happy to"

6.2 Copy Scoring Rubric (0-100)

Score = Sum of (rating × weight). Max = 100.

Phase 7: A/B Testing Protocol

7.1 What to Test (Impact Order)

Test the highest-impact element first:

7.2 Test Design

ab_test:
  element: "Headline"
  hypothesis: "Pain-focused headline will convert better than benefit-focused"
  control: "Automate Your Client Reporting in Minutes"
  variant: "Tired of Spending 10 Hours on Reports Nobody Reads?"
  metric: "click-through rate to pricing page"
  traffic_split: "50/50"
  minimum_sample: 500  # per variant for statistical significance
  duration: "2 weeks or until significance reached"
  confidence_threshold: "95%"

7.3 Statistical Significance Rules

• Minimum 100 conversions per variant before reading results
• 95% confidence minimum to declare a winner
• Don't peek — set the duration and wait. Early stopping = false positives
• Test one variable at a time (headline A vs B, not headline A + CTA A vs headline B + CTA B)
• Document everything — what you tested, what won, by how much, what you learned

Phase 8: Industry-Specific Copy Angles

8.1 B2B SaaS

• Lead with time saved or revenue gained (quantified)
• Speak to the buyer's BOSS (they need to justify the purchase)
• Integration and security are objections, not features (address them, don't lead with them)
• Free trial or freemium = expected. If no free tier, need stronger proof.

8.2 Professional Services (Consulting, Agencies)

• Lead with results from similar clients (specificity wins)
• Authority positioning > feature lists
• Case studies are your #1 asset
• Price = value-based, never hourly (frame accordingly)

8.3 E-commerce / DTC

• Lead with the transformation, not the product
• Social proof = user photos, reviews, influencer endorsements
• Urgency must be genuine (fake scarcity = brand damage)
• Mobile-first — above-the-fold must convert on a phone

8.4 Healthcare / Legal

• Compliance language is mandatory but doesn't have to be boring
• Trust and credentials > bold claims
• Education-first approach (content marketing → conversion)
• Risk reversal = critical (consequences of bad choice are high)

8.5 Financial Services

• Regulatory disclaimers are non-negotiable
• Lead with pain of current situation + cost of inaction
• Social proof from peers in similar situations
• Simplify complexity — if they need a glossary, you've lost them

Phase 9: Swipe File — Ready-to-Use Copy Blocks

9.1 Guarantee Templates

30-Day Money-Back:
"Try [Product] for 30 days. If it doesn't [specific outcome], 
email us and we'll refund every penny. No questions, no hassle."

Results-Based:
"If you don't see [specific measurable result] within [timeframe], 
we'll work with you for free until you do — or refund in full."

Risk Reversal:
"You risk nothing. We risk everything. That's how confident we are 
that [Product] will [outcome]."

9.2 Urgency Templates (Genuine Only)

Scarcity (real):
"We onboard 5 new clients per month to maintain quality. 
[X] spots left for [Month]."

Deadline (real):
"This pricing expires [Date] when we launch v2.0. 
Lock in the current rate now."

Cost of Delay:
"Every week without [solution], you're losing roughly [$ amount]. 
That's [$X * weeks until decision] by the time you decide."

9.3 Transition Phrases

Use these to maintain momentum between sections:

Problem → Solution:  "Here's the thing..."  |  "But it doesn't have to be this way."
Proof → CTA:         "Ready to see the same results?"  |  "Your turn."
Feature → Benefit:   "Which means..."  |  "In plain English:"  |  "Translation:"
Section → Section:   "But that's not all."  |  "It gets better."  |  "Here's where it gets interesting."

9.4 Opening Lines That Hook

Stat hook:      "83% of proposals lose on price. Yours doesn't have to."
Question hook:  "What if your biggest competitor's weakness was your biggest opportunity?"
Story hook:     "Last Tuesday, a 3-person agency closed a $240K deal. Here's exactly how."
Contrarian:     "Most advice about [topic] is wrong. Here's what actually works."
Pain hook:      "You know that sinking feeling when [specific pain moment]?"

Phase 10: Anti-Patterns (Copy Killers)

Natural Language Commands